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Going to go forward with my superman fan film finaly i am rewritren the scr6582

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Respectfully, your grammar and format are wholly incorrect.
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Collector David_Kent private msg quote post Address this user
Well this is the way I am going with it is still better then it was before
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Collector David_Kent private msg quote post Address this user
And I am the director as well as playing Lex ,and my friend michael is playing superman.
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Collector DJC_II private msg quote post Address this user
Buy this book, learn it, and live by it. Otherwise, quit.
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Collector David_Kent private msg quote post Address this user
Hi djc are you just trying to give me good advice?
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Collector David_Kent private msg quote post Address this user
Are you trying to help me?
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Collector DJC_II private msg quote post Address this user
@David_Kent I am giving you the advice. If you are serious about this endeavour, the time investment, and the craft, then take the right steps.
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Collector GAC private msg quote post Address this user
I would say yes, he is trying to help you to write a better script.
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Collector David_Kent private msg quote post Address this user
Ok then thank you I will take your advice to heart DJC,and get that book
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Collector David_Kent private msg quote post Address this user
I just found the book at the library I requested it. Should be coming in the next couple of days
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Collector DJC_II private msg quote post Address this user
@David_Kent you won't regret it. Treat it like gold
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Collector David_Kent private msg quote post Address this user
I will give a special shout out to you thank you so much I know this will really help!
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Collector David_Kent private msg quote post Address this user
That book is really helping! Going to rewrite the script next month.
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Collector David_Kent private msg quote post Address this user
Yeah the formatting is different in movie screenplays mine looks more like a play script !
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Collector David_Kent private msg quote post Address this user
Going to redo the lettering in courier font!
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Collector David_Kent private msg quote post Address this user
Have better camera directions in it like fade into present,past and interiors and exteriors of places.
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Collector David_Kent private msg quote post Address this user
Holy moly my goal was 205 pounds i have slimmed down to 193!
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Collector David_Kent private msg quote post Address this user
I am 193 pounds now.
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Quote:
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I am 193 pounds now.
Good job with your weight.
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Collector KingNampa private msg quote post Address this user
Can @kaptainmyke be in your movie? I think he would make a good Batman
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Collector David_Kent private msg quote post Address this user
Sure he could play batman i am playing lex and my friend michael is playing Superman.
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COLLECTOR kaptainmyke private msg quote post Address this user
Unless this is for fun only, your screenplays will never be read by any agents because it needs to be in the required length and format and font typeface. Listen to what everyone is trying to tell you. We are trying to help, that's all. But if it's for fun, you're good just keep having fun.
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Collector poka private msg quote post Address this user
@David_Kent don’t think @kaptainmyke would be suitable for the role of Batman. One need to have muscles and the looks for that role 🤭

Go for it but don’t have any expectations - if something good comes out of it - then great!

Good luck with your continuous weight loss
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COLLECTOR kaptainmyke private msg quote post Address this user
Quote:
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don’t think @kaptainmyke would be suitable for the role of Batman. One need to have muscles and the looks for that role 🤭


yo momma ho
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Collector KingNampa private msg quote post Address this user
@David_Kent any romance in this script? Need to have some sexy scenes for the ladies.
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Collector DJC_II private msg quote post Address this user
@kaptainmyke lol

@KingNampa agreed. I've actually always been partial to the Bruce Wayne, Clark Kent, Lois Lane awkward trio


Side note: like Kaptainmyke said, if this script is intended to be submitted for studio review, it needs to be formatted absolutely perfectly, otherwise it will get thrown out immediately. Literally immediately.
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COLLECTOR kaptainmyke private msg quote post Address this user
I can be moody like ben affleck

edit: that was a typo
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Collector David_Kent private msg quote post Address this user
No this is just for fun guys, this is not to be seen by a studio or agent.
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